I always wanted to work in Newyork city which is one of the biggest cities in the world. In Newyork city, anyone can succeed and also neumrous race are there. I have lived in Korea for 21years and had no many opportunities to meet different people. If I go to Newyork, which has lots of diversities, I would be more happy and generous mind to understand difference. Besides, there are a lot of good restaraunts. People can have good meal and a variety of food. I really like Newyork city's freedom and diversities. I hope I could have job in NYC in the future.
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That's fabulous! I have never been to NYC. Hope to visit there soon. So do you want to like in NY forever?
Oh, yes! I want to travel there, I've not been any city of USA! Also, I want to feel "Newyorker"
SeongBin, how long did it take you to write this? YOU CAN DO MORE! I KNOW IT! As I have mentioned many many times, weekend homework should be longer and more detailed.
New York is two separate words and should always be written that way.
New York is an amazing city with so much energy! The diversity adds another layer of vibrance. Go!
I know NY is the best city where isn't racism. I want to live NY also. However price is really expensive, and The job in NY is getted hard. Well! From now on I should plan more exact plan for living foriegner counrty..
This essay is too short. As Erika mentioned earlier, you need more contents. I can remember what Erika said. that is something like a rule to us. Yes, New York is one of the best city in the world. Everyone dreams on becoming a newyorker. I also have dreamed on becoming that. We can imagine our dream come true.
I wanna go NYC, too. I'm sorry that I don't get much more informations.
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